Monday, September 22, 2008

55 Word Short Story

Secret
It's not that easy to choose who I want. They're both similar, ones mine, but do I want him? The other is a secret, he said it has to be that way. As I quietly leave his house so he doesn't hear, I make my way to see my secret lover, his best friend.

4 comments:

nikix16 said...

There's so many emotions and conflicts going on in such a short piece. Fantastic job :)

Pakou Lee said...

Interesting! :)

Little Miss Diabetic said...

wow i love the conflict...who does she choose? i love this short story

Anonymous said...

that's wrong.....but goooood..lolz